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Band 5+: Write a letter to the supermarket manager. In your letter Tell why you were speaking with the employee Describe the employee's rude behavior Explain what you would you like the manager to

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Your address: navai

Data: 06.01.2025

Dear Sir or Madam

The reason why I am writing this letter to the supermarket manager. I went to your supermarket and I asked in your supermarket quality of things from manager. But, your employee talked rudely me. I had experienced inconvenient. I situation fell I was asking your manager in the supermarket food products’ the taste, shelf life and other information. And your employee shouted at me. I urge you to rectify this issue as soon as possible your employee to complete the transaction. This problem so that it doesn’t happen again. If such situations occur more often, it is clear that the supermarket will lose costumers if I do not receive a satisfactory response, I will have no choice but to escalate this matter further.

Your faithfully. Mushtariy

Word Count: 135

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