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Band 5+: write a letter to your English speaking friend that you have changed your job. in you letter why you changed your job describe your new job and company update him/her about other news

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Dear Ramesh,

I hope you’re well. I’m writing this letter to tell you that I’m no longer working at Australia post as a courrier. There was no promoting opportunities and also delivering parcels in the busy suburbs of Sydney was costing me my wealth.

However, as you know that I’ve done my studies in community services. I was able to get the job as a community worker at one of facility where I attended my work placement. This place is working for me really well as I get engage with so many lovely people of daily basis.

You’ll be happy to know that now I am actually able to invest some time of my day in music production as well. I am working on new album which I will send it to you by the end of this week. Let me know what you think about new songs.

Yours,

Raju

Word Count: 150

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

working: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear reasons for the job change, describing the new job and company, and sharing other news. The content is relevant and well-organized.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally easy to follow, but some sentences are grammatically incorrect, which affects the flow of the message. The use of paragraphs is appropriate.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with some instances of less common words and phrases. The vocabulary is generally used accurately and appropriately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors affect the overall clarity and fluency of the writing.

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