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Band 6+: write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visite the holidays

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Dear Ali;

I hope everything is going well with you and you are in good health condition besides your loved ones. It has been more than five years since we have met each other. The new year holidays are coming and I decided to spend my leisure time in your country to have a reunion.

I am planning to visit you and your family in the first step. Next, I will survey the culture and nature of Turkey. During the last week, I searched the internet about the tourist attractions of Istanbul, and I found several sightseeing places such as Isteglal Road, Ayasofiya mosque, and beautiful harbors, bridges, and islands. Also, I checked the forecasting and I found that weather conditions in the spring are good, generally.

Any other complementary suggestion from your side both in terms of travel options and tourist destinations would be helpful. I miss you and I can’t wait to meet you soon.

I am looking forward to hearing from your side

All the best

Saeed

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter mostly addresses the task by expressing the intention to visit the friend in another country during the holidays. However, it could be more specific about the exact dates or duration of the visit to enhance task response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent and cohesive, with ideas logically organized. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing the friend and planning the trip. Consider smoother transitions for better cohesion.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used, and some words and phrases are appropriate for the context. To improve lexical resource, try incorporating more varied and sophisticated vocabulary to enhance the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasings present. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and article usage for better accuracy.

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