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Band 5+: Write a letter to your supervisor requesting to change your work schedule. In your letter: - explain current schedule; - why you want to change it; - say what kind of schedule you need.

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Dear Mr Smith ,

I hope this massage finds you well. I am writing to formally request your assistance concerning in the matter of to change my current schedule which from Monday to Saturday from 7:00 a.m to 11:00 p.m .

I must apologize for troubling you with this matter and talking up your valuable time .However, there are some points which should be discussed and the first thing I would like to draw your attention to is that I want to change it .Because I am going to start language course .The reason is that I have to develop my language skills.

I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much.

I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter and inform me as soon as possible. You could send the above-mentioned information to my e-mail or a fax .

I look forward to receiving your prompt reply and adequate resolution on this matter in your earliest convenience. Please do not information. Thank you in advance for your assistance!

Yours faithfully,

Mamatova Gulmira

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

matter: 4

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Task Response

6.5

The letter fulfills the task's requirements by stating the current schedule, the reason for change, and the desired schedule. However, the explanation could be more concise and direct.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow is disrupted by some awkward phrasing and unclear connections between ideas. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks sophistication and range. More precise and varied word choices would improve the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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