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Band 4+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or madam,

My self david warner working as software engineer at HCL tehcnologies. i learned from my colleague that your organisation is conducting a workshop on Data analytics. iam keen to attend this conference this fall and, i was wondering if u can provide the details regarding the seminar.

Firstly, iam coming from Australia so i have to plan ahead with visa and other immigration processes. i would like to know when exactly the event is happening and i heard the host will be Steve Jacobs is that true? Coming to Accomodation, should we take care of ourselves or is there any package upfront to pay so that your commitee can take care of everything. What would be the price of those packages? and how many guesta are allowed on one Entry pass. Additionally, is it only going to be about Data analytics or will they also elaborate more on data Engineering as well?

Thank you in advance, i look foward to hearing from you at your earliest.

yours faithfully,

David warner.

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter effectively addresses the task by requesting information about the seminar. It covers all the necessary details, including dates, program, accommodation, and cost.

Coherence & Cohesion

3.5

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The paragraphs are not well-organized, and the information is presented in a somewhat disjointed manner. The use of commas and sentence structure could be improved for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of informal language and minor errors in word choice. The use of more formal and precise language would enhance the overall impression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect punctuation, verb tenses, and article usage. These errors affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter.

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