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Band 6+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Diljit,

I’m really amazed to know that you are planning to go on a camping holiday. It’s your first time that you are planning something different and adventurous for your summer vacations. Do you remember, last year I also spent my vacations doing the same? It’s one of the most thrilling plans to enjoy your holiday and I think you must go for it. The fun doing the adventure, quiet nights sitting near bonfire and calm surroundings make you feel rejuvenated and lively.

Although this kind of trip is definitely enjoyable, you still need to be very careful with some facts. You need to choose the location wisely, otherwise you’re going to ruin your trip, and if you aren’t preplanning your trip initially, you might not be able to enjoy well.

I wish I would have initially planned to go along, but I already promised my family to go to Shimla and spend my vacations over there. I hope you enjoy your holiday.

See you soon!

Manu

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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vacations: 3

enjoy: 3

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Task Response

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing reasons why the friend would enjoy camping, potential disadvantages, and the writer's own plans. The letter is well-structured and engaging.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter flows well, but there are a few minor grammatical errors that slightly disrupt the flow. The paragraphing is generally good, but could be improved with more concise sentences.

Lexical Resource

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, with some effective descriptive language. The vocabulary is generally accurate and appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, but there are a few errors that affect the overall clarity and accuracy. The punctuation is generally correct, but could be improved in some areas.

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