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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir,

I am writing to give you a reviews on cookery course that you started recently.

At a begging of this course, I enjoyed a lot and the special part were cooking unique items as well as sweet delights. Moreover, the other parts of this course were also enjoyable like cleaning dishes and making spicy foods.

During my enrolment period I was not understanding anything but gradually I am getting in it. I had completed half course in two months and the remaining course will be done after two months and students will enjoy a lot.

I would sujjest you that tell your facility of the school to start another course of cookery due to a high demand of this course in your school. Most of the student came to me and ask for another course of cookery. I would advice you that this again as soon as possible.

I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours sincerely,

Jon

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4.5

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