Pie Chart

Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image presents three pie charts indicating the distribution of different nutrients in meals: sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar in the USA. For sodium, breakfast comprises 14%, lunch 29%, dinner 43%, snacks 14%. For saturated fat, breakfast is 16%, lunch 26%, dinner 37%, snacks 21%. For added sugar, breakfast is 16%, lunch 19%, dinner 23%, snacks 42%.

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The given chart illustrate the total percentage in typical mail consumed in u.S.A. Which are sodium, saturated fat.And added sugar which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Overall in the chart, it can clearly solve that in breakfast time. People does not eat that much of nutritions. The sodium and saturated fat was highly taken at dinner time then snack and added sugar was more consumed at snack time. All three items was eaten by consumer has almost identical percentage.

Firstly, sodium in dinner has 43% which was highest and less percent taken is 14% is a snack and breakfast time. At lunch citizen ate 29% of sodium in the USA. The saturated fat also has its highest ratio in dinner which it was 37%. At snack and lunch time the percentage of consumption has almost the same which was 21% and26%.

Lastly, added sugar, which is altered then two others has its highest range in snacks 42%. About the same question breakfast and lunch has 16% and 19%. Second highest % of nutritions eaten in dinner is 23% in the USA.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

which: 6

sodium: 4

dinner: 4

snack: 4

highest: 4

saturated: 3

added: 3

sugar: 3

eaten: 3

breakfast: 3

lunch: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the charts, but there are some areas for improvement. The organization is generally clear, but the language could be more precise and sophisticated. There are also some inaccuracies in the data reported. To improve, focus on using more accurate data, varied vocabulary, and complex sentence structures.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be improved to enhance coherence. For example, using phrases like 'In contrast' or 'Similarly' can help connect ideas more smoothly. The report also lacks a clear overview statement in the introduction.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive. There is a reliance on basic words like 'eat,' 'take,' and 'has.' To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to food consumption and percentages. For instance, instead of 'has its highest ratio,' consider using 'accounts for the largest proportion.' Also, be careful with word choice; 'mail' should be 'meal'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('People does not eat'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing ('About the same question breakfast and lunch has'). Sentence structure is also quite simple, limiting the range of grammatical structures demonstrated. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence types (complex, compound) and ensure correct verb tense and subject-verb agreement. Proofreading carefully for errors is essential.

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