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Band 4+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a line graph of UK fuel production levels in energy units from 1981 to 2000. Petroleum starts at 100 in 1981, peaks at 125 in 1986, dips to 100 in 1992, and ends at 130 in 2000. Natural gas is 40 in 1981, reaches 60 in 1991, and finishes at 100 in 2000. Coal begins at 80 in 1981, decreases to 70 in 1986, falls to 40 in 1999, and maintains this level in 2000.

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The given chart illustrates production levels of the main fuels in the UK between different years start with 1981 to 2000.

All in all,production of three different fuels such as coal, petroleum, natural gas. The big change is with petroleum and illustrates a downward tend and the low change is petroleum.

First of all, the natural gas started at 40 energy units in 1981, before 1991 was stabilized and significantly increased to 100 units. The coal started at 80 units to 1984 was steadily declined to 40 units. To 1986 is gradually rose to 60 energy units. And to drop slightly and remain constant to 40 in 2000.

The third one is petroleum, petroleum was 90 and jump to 140 before 1987. To 1991 fall to 100, after level off at 140 units. Stay stable to 2000.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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units: 6

petroleum: 4

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The description of trends is not always accurate, and the language used is sometimes imprecise. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, using more precise language, and structuring the report with a clear overview, detailed descriptions, and relevant comparisons. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear overall structure and the information is not presented in a logical order. The introduction is weak and doesn't effectively summarize the graph's content. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences, making it difficult to follow the main trends. Transitions between sentences and ideas are weak or missing, leading to a disjointed flow. Paragraphing is not well-managed, contributing to the overall lack of coherence. To improve, focus on organizing the information into clear, logical paragraphs, using topic sentences to introduce the main point of each paragraph, and incorporating transition words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies and inappropriate word choices. There is a reliance on basic vocabulary, and more precise and sophisticated language could be used to describe the trends and changes shown in the graph. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to describing trends (e.g., increase, decrease, fluctuate, peak, plateau) and use more specific and descriptive language to convey the information accurately. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in sentence structure. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and word order. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your accuracy improves.

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