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Band 6+: You and some friends want to start a weekly dance club and you have found a hall that would be suitable to hold your meetings. write a letter to the owner of the hall In your letter 1) Explain your and your friends project 2) ask if it is possible to rent the hall and under what terms 3) State what day and what times you would like to use the hall

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Susan, a student at Manson College. I saw an advertisement that your hall near the supermarket is being held for rent. I would like to know some details of the hall, as I have an idea to rent it.

My friend and I have been searching for a party hall that would be suitable to have our dance club. This dance club is focused on rock and folk dancing. It was his dream project to start a dance club, and we used to discuss a lot about it for 2 years. I think that your hall suits well. It would be great if we were allowed to rent this house, and then I would like to know from you about the rent amount and what are the terms and conditions of this hall.

We will use the hall only on week ends. This hall won’t be needed on public holidays and our semester breaks. I would be happy to meet you in person to discuss the possibility of this rental.

I hope to hear back from you soon with a positive reply.

Thanking You.

Yours faithfullly,

Susan.

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Overall Band Score

6.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
would: 5
dance: 3
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Task Response

7
The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More specific details about the club and desired rental terms would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The letter's message is mostly clear, but some improvements in organization and flow would enhance readability. Minor grammatical issues affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

7
The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6
While the grammar is largely understandable, several errors detract from the overall accuracy and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy will significantly enhance the score.

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