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Band 6+: You and some friends want to start a weekly dance club and you have found a hall that would be suitable to hold your meetings. write a letter to the owner of the hall In your letter 1) Explain your and your friends project 2) ask if it is possible to rent the hall and under what terms 3) State what day and what times you would like to use the hall

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Trust this letter reaches you in good health. I am writing to inquire about the place where I have recently seen it on social media since it is the perfect place with appropriate settings and ample natural light which are suitable for the project.

More clearly, this project is not as simple as you think because this is one of the best projects I have ever done with my friend. This project is about the dance club session which we are on the verge of opening, and I have been looking for a suitable location. In other words, in the dancing club, we are mainly focusing on ‘Rock and Roll’ music, which enables us to become popular at our college.

Additionally, having inquired at the city’s town hall, I have been given your contact information and would like to ask whether it is possible to rent your hall and what the conditions would be for this. We would need the hall every Monday from 7 am to 12 pm. However, during public holidays and college semester breaks, the hall will not be needed. I would be happy to meet you at the hall one evening after my classes to discuss the possibility of this rental.

Thank you for considering my request, and I appreciate the time and energy that goes into this matter.

Yours sincerely,

Aziz.

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Overall Band Score

6
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
would: 4
which: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the project, inquiring about renting the hall, and stating the preferred day and time. However, some parts could be more focused and clearer to fully meet the task requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with clarity and organization. The flow of ideas could be improved by better structuring the content into more coherent paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

6
There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some expressions are awkward or unclear. Try to use more formal and appropriate language for a business letter. Additionally, aim for more precise and varied word choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6
The letter demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are some errors in sentence structure and punctuation. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence clarity for better accuracy.

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