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Band 5+: You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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Dear Mr Walker,

I’m writing to apply to the post of the Quality Assurance Manager as advertised on the University’s board on the 13th of November 2024. I believe I am the perfect candidate for the job as I have the skillsets and work experience.

I’m a year 3 student of this prestigious university and currently enrolled in Business and Administrative management. My course fits perfectly with the role as the topics taught aligns with the requirements. Also, I’ve taken on different managerial trainings and attended several conferences to help hone my skills. I cultivated the habit of continuous learning and this made me flexible and teachable.

I have a year experience working as a store manager on campus, during this time I oversaw the supplies, and, makes sure every items brought in are of standard quality. I am looking to start a fast food business after I graduate. Therefore, I believe this job would prepare and equip me with the knowledge needed to succeed at it.

I have attached my resume for your perusal and I’m available to discuss my qualifications further. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your response soonest.

Yours Faithfully,

Olawumi A.

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Overall Band Score

5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The candidate's suitability is clearly explained, although further development of the connection between their experience and the job requirements would strengthen this section.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter is generally easy to follow. However, some improvements in paragraph structure and flow would enhance the overall coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although more precise and sophisticated language could be used in places to elevate the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While the letter is understandable, there are several grammatical errors that detract from the overall clarity and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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