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Band 4+: You are a member of a student council at school. write a letter to a council asking to improve school library describe why improving the library is important for students suggest specific improvments say how improvments will be benefit.

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My name is durdona, and I am writing this letter one of the member of the student council. I’m writing to ask for your assistance in fixing our library. I would be grateful if you could solve this problem.

First of all, there is no wife network for students to read electronic books, as some student are more interested in these books than others. In addition to this, learner can find book on Google that are not in our library. Furthermore, there has been a significant problem with the legs of the chairs for a long time. When learners sit down in this chairs to read education resources, they make a creaking sound that disturbs the other readers and as a result,they cannot focus on reading properly Thirdly, the rooms get cold in the winter due to a problem with the heating system. In my view, we should check the pipeline of this system or replace the hot water adiators with new ones so that it can work better.Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to receiving a prompt response andsatisfactory resolution .

Yours faithful

Durdona Pardaquliyeva .

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task by requesting improvements to the school library, highlighting the importance of these improvements, suggesting specific improvements, and mentioning the benefits. However, there are some areas where the task could be more effectively addressed. The letter could provide more detailed reasons for why improving the library is important and how these improvements will benefit the students.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues that affect the overall flow. The organization of ideas could be improved by separating the different issues into distinct paragraphs. Additionally, there are some awkward phrasings and grammatical errors that hinder the clarity of the message.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. More precise and accurate word choices would enhance the lexical resource. Additionally, there are some spelling errors that need to be corrected.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While a variety of sentence structures are attempted, there are several grammatical errors throughout the letter. Punctuation errors and awkward sentence constructions also impact the overall accuracy. Proofreading for grammar and punctuation would be beneficial.

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