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Band 5+: You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired 2. Your energy and enthusiasm for the job 3. Your past experience in a similar position.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of financial manager as advertised on your company website two days ago.

The main reason I want to become a financial manager that I want to learn more about finance. Addtionaly, I want to get experience by foregin experts. I believe that I try to contribute to the devolepment of the company.

I gratuated with a Bachelor of Science in financial manager in 2020. And I have been working for financial manager in ABC Company for the last three years. I believe that I have enough experience to work as a financial manager in your company and I hope you will consider my application.

I am abailable for interview any day apart from Wednesday.

Thank you for your attention. I look forward to receiving your reply.

Yours faithfully,

AYDANA KUANYSHBAEVA.

Word Count: 142

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

financial: 5

manager: 5

company: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task, but could be more detailed and specific in explaining the reasons for applying to this particular job and company. It would be helpful to mention specific aspects of the job or company that appeal to you. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but there are some grammatical errors that affect the flow of the message. The organization could be improved by using more cohesive devices and clearer paragraphing.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or in an unnatural way. A more sophisticated and precise vocabulary would be beneficial.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains a number of grammatical errors, including incorrect word choices, spelling mistakes, and punctuation errors. These errors affect the overall clarity and professionalism of the letter.

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