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Band 8+: You are applying for a membership at a local gym. Write a letter to the gym manager expressing your interest. You should include: - why you want to join the gym - what your fitness goals are - any previous experience with gyms or fitness activities.

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Dear Gym Manager,

My name is Alina, and I am considering joining your gym in the near future. I am keen to improve my overall fitness and would appreciate some further details before registering.

Could you please provide information regarding the facilities available at your gym? In particular, I would like to know what types of equipment you offer, as well as whether you run any group classes such as yoga, strength training, or cardio sessions. I would also be grateful if you could share the weekly class timetable.

In addition, I would like to inquire about membership fees. Do you offer any discounted rates for students or long-term memberships, and are there flexible payment options available.

Thank you in advance for your assistance. I look forward to your response.

Yours faithfully,

Alina.

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