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Band 6+: You are arranging a special celebration. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter You want to invite a singer to perform. • • tell him/her about the event invite him/her to perform at the event explain why you would like him/her to perform Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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Dear Satinder,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am organising a very special celebration for my parents. It is their 50th wedding anniversary on May 5 at Olive Garden Resort. I am writing to invite you on their special day to make it even more special for them.

My parents are die hard fan of your singing. I personally, enjoy every melody you sing which is extremely soothing. Your lyrics are not only meaningful but also motivational. I really adore your attires and they way you interact with your fans and audience which is really appreiciated. Your presence would not only elevate the celebration but also creates an unforgettable experience for my parents and guests also.

Moreover, it’s a wedding surprise for them by me. Having you perform it live would be a great surprise for them and it would make the day memberable for them.

Please let me know if you are available on this date and what are the requirements and fees would be.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your truly,

Kirandeep Kaur.

Word Count: 179

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 4

special: 3

parents: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, providing relevant details about the event, extending an invitation to the singer, and explaining the reasons for the invitation. There are a few minor areas for improvement, such as elaborating slightly more on the event details or providing more specific information about the performance expectations. However, the letter is well-written and effectively communicates the message.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and the purpose is clear. However, some sentences could be linked more smoothly to improve the flow. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to enhance the connection between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to incorporate more varied and precise language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'special,' try synonyms like 'memorable' or 'significant.' Also, 'die hard fan' is a bit informal; consider 'ardent fans' for a more formal tone.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the grammar is mostly accurate, there are a few areas where improvements can be made. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct article usage. For example, 'My parents are die hard fan' should be 'My parents are die-hard fans.' Reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully can help minimize these errors.

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