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Band 6+: You are considering taking a short online course to enhance your skills and need to inform your manager about it. Write an email to your manager explaining your intentions. You should include details about: - which course you are interested in - how it will benefit your work and the company - your plan for managing your workload while studying.

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Dear Mr Lane,Hope this email finds you well. I was browsing the SkillsUpgrade website the other day and found a short corse that I think would greatly benefit me. I thought I should inform you about this course in case you have any questions.

The 6-weeks course I am interested in is called Introduction to Time Management. It will take place every Tuesday and Thursday from 6pm to 9pm.

I believe that allowing me to upskill through this course would increase work efficiency and allow for projects to be completed at a faster pace while still maintaining high standards.

As the course takes place after working hours, it will not affect my work at the office. However, there will be a few days where I have to attend examinations in-person in which I will make sure to apply for days off in advance. There are also no conflict of interest to report.

Please feel free to ask me any questions about this course.

Thank you!

Yours sincerely,

Kate Leong

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The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail on how the course benefits the company would improve the response.

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6.5

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5.5

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