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Band 5+: You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems . Write a letter to your new employer.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this letter will find you well. It is a shame that I have made such a terrible mistake with you and feel sorry for that I will not be able to start my new job next week because I have some problems.

First and foremost, I would like to personally apologize for your inconvenience. You know, we have to go to America with my family next week. Because my uncle lives there, and he is organizing an important party next week. All of our relatives will go to this party. If we do not go to this party my uncle organizing, he may be upset. We have already bought yet another tickets for America.

Secondly, even if it is an unforgettable event in my life. I would like vanish may fault by doing the missed work when I come back to start the work.

I hope you would take into consideration and accept my apologize as it is highly important for me.

I look forward to receiving from you,

Yours faithfully,

Samandar Xolmirzayev

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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party: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and professionalism in explaining the reasons for not starting the job. More detail and a more formal tone would improve this aspect.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by some unclear phrasing and grammatical errors. Improving grammar and sentence structure would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks sophistication and precision in places. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would improve the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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