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Band 6+: You are going on a month training program to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events organizer Write a letter to the training organizer in your letter expressing your interest in the role requesting more information about it explaining what experience you have

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding training programme that is being held in the United Kingdom. I am one of the members of this programme and I would consider myself as a good applicant for the organiser of social events.

I have keen interest in this role because I have done bachelors in organising events last year and now I would love to do some practical tasks related to it.

Moreover, I know that the organiser have to handle the guests at the stage but can you please let me know if I also have to handle the stage or not. So can you please provide me details about it.

In addition, last year in September I did organise an event in my home-townly which went very well, even the chief guest praised me.

I look forward to hearing from you

Yours faithfully,

Gagandeep Kaur

Word Count: 147

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B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and persuasive. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraphing. Some sentences lack clarity.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is sufficient but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated language would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

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