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Band 4+: You are going on a month training program to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events organizer Write a letter to the training organizer in your letter expressing your interest in the role requesting more information about it explaining what experience you have

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Dear Sir /Madam

I’m writing this letter to inform you for I am training a month to the UK and know that head of the course. I’m Niro, from srilanka, one of the participants to be the social event. I believe qualified this programme. Because I have experienced.

I have sociology degree and good communication and leadership skills. hence I very interest in this topic. I have 5 year experience In this course. I done ans successful completed some of social events in the own island in srilanka and out side country India and USA.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

R.Niro

Word Count: 105

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, expressing interest, requesting information, and providing relevant experience. However, the response could be more structured and detailed. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization and flow of ideas need improvement. The numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the overall coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated language would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and understanding. Improved grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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