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Band 4+: You are going on a short training course at a college in New Zealand. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to get some information about accommodation in Ireland.

Recently, I recieved my offer letter from greenmount college and i need an accommodation for my living, and study purpose.

I have some requirement about the accommodation, I am looking for a private room and attached washroom, kitchen plus balcony in addition to near my college either to walk or take a bus to reach college in the minimum amount of 10 minutes. If I share the house with my family it would be a great home for me. And the rend is 800 hundred to under 1000 thousand dollar I afford it.

My course is start from 10th February and I want the accommodation before 25th of January. I will come to the home at 25th and I would be able to concentrate on my course without any stress.

I look forward to hearing from you very soon.

Your faithfully

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