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Band 5+: You are going to London soon to stay there for one year write a letter to an agency to get information about accommodation. In your letter you should say Why you are going to London What kind of accommodation you want When you will arrive

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Dear sir/madam,

I am writing this letter to inquire about accommodation options in London, as I am planning to relocate in this year for my study.

The main purpose of my stay in London is to pursue my one year diploma in financial management at a esteem institution.

I am looking for a apartment that is suitable for long-term stay, as its not easy move every month. I prefer to live near the train or bus station, as its convenient to go to educational institution and workplace. Hence, this will help me to efficiently manage my daily commute.

I am scheduled to arrive in London on December 19th and I would appreciate if you could provide me with information about available accommodation that meet my preferences. Additionally, I would like to know about rent rates, lease terms and conditions, and any other charges that may apply.

Thank you for your prompt attention to my inquiry. I eagerly await your response.

Your sincerely

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