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Band 6+: you are going to move to a new company. you want to say goodbye to your colleagues in your present job. write a letter to one of your colleagues. in your letter - give details about the job you are going to do - say when you are going to leave your present job - suggest an idea for a goodbye party write at leate 150 words

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Dear Tamara,

I hope this letter finds you in good health. As you know, I recently resigned from my position as Bravo Team Commander in our company, and I’m joining Spectre International Security next month. I’m writing this letter to you to say my farewells and express my gratitude.

As the Bravo Team Commander, I had the opportunity to work in peacekeeping operations in both Iraq and Afghanistan, and it has been an honor to serve with the best ex-military officer of our country. You, in the senior management have been my best friend and enabler, so I’m especially thankful to you.

I’ll be joining my older sister Tanya Ivanovic’s PMC, Spectre International International Security now and hopefully I’ll be back in action in the Middle East or Ukraine as their chief security Commander.

I’m looking forward to getting back in the warzones again. My last day here will be the 10th of February.

I’m planning to give you guys a massive pizza and beer party before my last day of course.

Thank you once again for being there when I needed to.

Regards

Michael Victor Ivanovic

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

international: 3

security: 3

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Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail could be provided about the new job and the goodbye party suggestion.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The letter is generally easy to follow, but some improvements in the flow and paragraphing would enhance readability. The grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but more precise and sophisticated word choices would elevate the writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter uses a range of grammatical structures, there are several errors that impact the overall accuracy and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is key.

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