🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!

Letter

Band 7+: You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people t celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbor. In your letter: Explain what will be happening Offer your apologies in advance Invite him to join the celebration.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

Dear Mr. Kulligowski,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am organizing a party next Sunday evening.

It is a small function that I am holding to celebrate my graduation. I invited my family and close friends to express my gratitude for their support and love throught my journey of success. For this event, I arranged some dance programs to engage my guests.

I sincerely apologize to you in advance, my party is starting at 7:00 p. m. in my garden, and it will be continuing till midnight. So I admit that there will some inevitable noise that might make disturbance in your sleep. But I can promise you that I take measures to control the noise level at the maximum limit.

In the end, I am heartily welcoming your honourable presence at my event.

Once again please accept my apologies and my invitation.

Yours sincerely,

Mariya C. J.

Word Count: 159

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

All parts of the task are addressed, but some could be improved by providing more detail.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is mostly coherent, but there are some areas where the flow could be improved. Paragraphing is adequate.

Lexical Resource

6.5

Vocabulary is generally appropriate, but some words are used incorrectly, and there is a lack of naturalness in expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

There are several grammatical errors that affect overall clarity. A wider range of grammatical structures would improve the writing.

Answers On The Same Topic:

You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people t celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbor. In your letter: Explain what will be happening Offer your apologies in advance Invite him to join the celebration.

I hope you and your family are doing well. I am your neighbor next door. I am writing to you that I am hosting a party for the achievement of my degree this coming Sunday evening in the garden. I would appreciate it if you could join us for this lovely moment. The graduation party […]

Band 6+

See All

Other Topics:

During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job Begin as follows: Dear ... ,

Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing with reference to the potential job opportunity we discussed during our flight SU1618 on September 1st. I would like to formally express my strong interest in the Tech Business Analyst position for back-office automation at your company. With a robust background in the banking sector and extensive hands-on experience […]

Band 9

You want to rent out a small apartment to a family, and you have decided to advertise it. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper asking to advertise your ad on the front page of the newspaper. In your letter, 1. give details of the ad that you want to publish 2. mention that you want the ad to be published on the front page say 3. how you would like to pay for the advertisement Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to kindly request to publish the advertisement of a small apartment to rent out to a family on the front page of your newspaper. I am planning to rent out from first day of the next month as I will be moving abroad. The apartment that I am […]

Band 6+

You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter x describe the problem with the equipment x explain what happened when you phoned the shop x say what you would like the manager to do

Hello madam, I hope this message finds you well. I am sending this message regarding a defective product. I recently bought a refrigerator from your shop, but it’s cooling power wasn’t as high as claimed. When I contacted the shop through the phone, and i addressed the problem, the cashier denied the refund and even […]

Band 7+

A friend told you recently he/she has gone gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend Tell your friend your planned party Ask what kind of food it serve and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu

Dear Pat, Good day my precious friend.I am writing to tell you about my plans for my upcoming birthday next week . Last month ,when we met at the wedding anniversary celebration of your parents, you told me that you had a memorable experience in one of the next restaurant to the nearby Trevor City. […]

Band 6+

You were supposed to attend a friend's birthday party last weekend, but you didn't show up without any notice. Write a letter to your friend apologizing for your absence. You should include details about: - why you couldn't attend the party - why you didn't inform them beforehand - how you plan to make it up to them.

Dear Reena I am writing to apologise for arrivng late in your birthday party. I was over the moon on 6th October, afterall it was my bestie birthday. You will be surprised to know that I told all my colleagues about your birthday bash and Sushant as you know, your secret admirer, was insisting to […]

Band 5+

You borrowed a laptop from your company to work from home, but you accidentally spilled liquid on it, and it no longer works. Write a letter to your manager apologizing for the damage. You should include details about: - how the damage occurred - the current condition of the laptop - what steps you will take to resolve the issue or replace the device.

Dear, Jody I am writing to inform you of an indicident that occured over the weekend, where I accidentally spilled coffee on the laptop that you loan to me. I am regrettable sorry, I know how much your laptop means to you and the data that was stored on it. Firstly, the coffee spilling on […]

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium