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Band 5+: You are hosting a farewell dinner for a colleague who is leaving the company and want to invite your team members. Write a letter to a team member inviting them to the dinner. You should include details about: - why you are organizing the farewell dinner - when and where the dinner will be held - if there's anything they need to prepare or contribute.

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Subject :- Organizing a farewell party

I am very glab to share this news that our company is organizing an farwell party to Mr Johans on 19 February @ from 4:00 pm to 8:00 pm at conference me @ party hall.

As you, all know very well Mr John is going to retired on this weekend. So, for his great lifetime hardwork and compatibility our company organizes party for him. I requested to all of you to attend his farewell.

No doubt our firm already purchases a beautiful watch as a present for him. But as a good team members it’s our responsibility as well to buy any gift as a token of love for him.

Thank you for your support and time.

Nevertheless forget to come on this auspicious day.

Yours faithfully,

Cruz( Site Superintendent)

Word Count: 138

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

party: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, providing the date, time, location, reason for the party, and what to bring. However, there are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, 'glab' should be 'glad,' and the sentence about Mr. John's retirement could be phrased more clearly. Also, the closing could be more professional. To improve, focus on proofreading for grammatical accuracy and clarity. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between ideas to guide the reader. For example, clearly separate the announcement of the party, the reason for it, and the request for contributions. Paragraphing could be more effective in delineating these distinct points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and contains some inaccuracies ('glab' instead of 'glad,' 'farwell' instead of 'farewell'). To improve, focus on using more precise and varied vocabulary related to celebrations and professional environments. For example, instead of 'beautiful watch,' you could say 'an elegant timepiece.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. For example, 'Mr John is going to retired' should be 'Mr. John is going to retire' or 'Mr. John is retiring.' Pay close attention to sentence structure and proofread carefully to avoid these errors. Also, avoid informal phrasing like 'Nevertheless forget to come,' and replace it with something more appropriate, such as 'We look forward to seeing you there.'

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