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Band 6+: You are interested in attending a short training course. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: • describe the course you are interested in • explain why you want to attend • ask for further details about the course

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to the short training course for Personal Support Workers invented by the local authorities. I particularly have an interest in joining the course that will begin at the end of next month at North York General Hospital.

In my interest, I want to join because the demand of the course would be more higher compared to the other course. Along with that, I am keen to help elderly people and learn about their emotions at an older age, which I will learn in this course.

Could you please add my name in the list of users, as I cannot miss this opportunity at all. Further, I’d love to know how and when some modules will take place, either online or in person.

I look forward to your positive response.

Your sincerely,

Rajvirsinh Rajput

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in clarity and precision would enhance the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure is generally clear, but some sentences lack logical flow. Improving sentence structure and transitions would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is functional but could be more precise and varied. Using more sophisticated vocabulary would improve the overall lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

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