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Band 5+: You are moving to a new country to go to university and are also looking for a part-time job. You have a friend who lives in that country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Greet him/her and apologise for not staying in touch more • Tell him/her why you are moving to this country • Ask him/her if he/she can help you find a job

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Hello Mira,

How was your life my friends, i hope you are in a good condition.

I am sorry i have not contacted you all this time. I am so busy with my college to prepare my study abroad. I am focused with my study so i do not have more time to contact you all time.

At the moment, i got schoolarship in Sydney University. I am so happy to inform you this good news. I am moving to Sydney and i will be starting university there soon and also i want to find a part time job there.

I am reaching out to ask for your help to finding a job opportunity. Given your network and experience, i think you might be the perfect person to turn to some advice.

I really hope you find this letter and contact me after you read it.

Best wishes

Irma

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and engaging. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact. Some lexical choices are slightly informal.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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