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Band 6+: You are moving to a new country to go to university and will need a part - time job . You have a friend who lives in that country . Write a letter to your friend . In your letter , apologise for not staying in touch explain why you're moving to this country ask your friend if he / she can help you find a job .

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Dear Maninder,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to let you know that I am coming to the USA next month.

I hope you should be doing well in the US. First of all, I want to apologise for being out of touch with you for a while now. Since, I was occupied in a few personal chores because of my father’s demise six months ago.

Owing to this, mishap I left my studies in between, but now I have decided to pursue my Master’s degree in Computer Applications in Boston. The course in commencing in March, therefore, I will land there in last week of February.

Since, you are living in Boston for two years now, and I was wondering it if you could help me in finding a part-time job. Which, will give me an opportunity to survive in alien surroundings. Moreover, I see this as a new begining of our years old relationship. I hope you will help me in best of your abilities and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best Wishes,

Jatinder.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in clarity and directness would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The letter's structure is generally clear, but some sentences could be improved for better flow and connection between ideas. The grammar errors noted affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, showing a good range. More precise word choices in places would improve the overall lexical range and accuracy.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, there are several errors that impact the overall accuracy and fluency. Addressing these would significantly improve the score.

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