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Band 5+: You are moving to a new house. Write a letter to your friend inviting them to your house-warming party and giving them details about the new house.

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Hello my friend! It’s me Amina, your best friend. I wanna invite you to my new house to the housewarming party, where we can finally talk about everything that we have accumulated, and play a lot of games that me planned.

My new house lockated in the village now. This mini town named Besagash, which is located between the city Almaty and Talgar as you know. This is residential complex with a four blocks, each of a different color, where is mine located in green one in 22b. And it is located near the shopping store named Magnum, where you could buy a few snacks for this party. Additionally, there you can see the Face ID, then just call me and I will come to took you and show the house.

Nevertheless, this party would be so good, that’s why bring your comfortable clothes and don’t forget your socks and some drinks. I also invited all our mutual friends with whom definetily wont be bored. There will be different games and cool entertainment, so be sure to come on June 12th at 5 pm without being late. I will be waiting for you!

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

party: 3

where: 3

located: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all three bullet points required by the task. The location is described, the house is characterized (as part of a residential complex), and the party details (date, time, and items to bring) are provided. However, the response could be improved by ensuring the description of the house is more substantial; currently, most of the description focuses on the surrounding area rather than the house itself. Additionally, while the tone is appropriately informal for a friend, some phrasing is slightly awkward or contains grammatical errors that occasionally obscure the intended meaning. To improve, focus on providing a more direct description of the house's features (e.g., number of rooms, garden, or style) to fully satisfy the second bullet point.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter follows the required structure and addresses all parts of the prompt, which helps the reader follow the intent. However, the flow is interrupted by awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. For example, the transition 'Nevertheless' is used incorrectly; 'nevertheless' is used to show contrast, whereas you were trying to express enthusiasm or a concluding thought. To improve, use cohesive devices like 'Also,' 'Regarding the party,' or 'As for the location' to guide the reader more smoothly between topics.

Lexical Resource

You have attempted to use some specific vocabulary (e.g., 'residential complex', 'mutual friends'), which is good. However, there are several instances of informal or incorrect word choices, such as 'wanna' (which is too informal even for a friend in a written exam) and 'accumulated' (which does not fit the context of 'talking about everything'). Try to use more natural collocations. Instead of 'the house is lockated in the village now,' use 'My new house is located in a village.' Avoid using slang like 'wanna' in the IELTS exam to maintain a better standard of lexical control.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally make sentences difficult to understand. There are issues with verb tenses (e.g., 'me planned' instead of 'I planned', 'I will come to took you' instead of 'I will come to pick you up'), subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure (e.g., 'where is mine located in green one'). To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, particularly the use of relative clauses and correct verb forms after 'to' (infinitive). Practicing the distinction between 'I' (subject) and 'me' (object) will also help significantly.

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