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Band 4+: You are moving to a new house. Write a letter to your friend inviting them to your house-warming party and giving them details about the new house.

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Hi Pavish,

I hope you are doing great. It is been a while since we met. have you knew, I build a house in my home town now it finished. So, I am planing to a small house warming party on next month, party has with full of dance and delisious food.

In addition, I think, you might know my home town, It located on south part of tamilnadu named tiruchengode. When you reach bus station, I will pick up you.

However, My home is three bed rooms, hall and kitchen, As you know, I put lots of effort to built my house, I am very proud of me. The bedroom is fully furnished and decorated with high quality of architech work and few empty land behind my house, I have planned to set a garden area on it. On the other hand, This place is suitable for our friends chill-out area. I hope you should love this place. My family is waiting for your arrive.

Take care,

Nithish

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

house: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by inviting the friend to the housewarming party and providing details about the new house. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but the overall message is clear. To improve, focus on using more natural and accurate language, and ensure all sentences are grammatically correct.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are often abrupt, making it harder for the reader to follow the invitation and details about the house. Consider using more cohesive devices to link your ideas and create a smoother, more logical progression.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there are instances where more precise or varied word choices could enhance the letter. For example, instead of 'delisious food,' you could use 'a variety of delicious dishes.' Expanding your range of vocabulary and using more descriptive language will make your writing more engaging. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense ('have you knew,' 'I build'), subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Sentence structure is also quite basic, limiting the complexity of the ideas you can express. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and practice constructing more varied sentence types.

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