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Band 5+: You are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sports centre that you visit. Write a letter to the manager. - What the problem is - How you feel about the problem - What steps you want the manager to take

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Dear Sir/Medam,

I am writing this letter in regard to make a complaint about your sports centre bathrooms. Last week I was came to your sport centre for participate to the volley ball compation. That time I was went to the bathroom. I had feel some problems about your bathroom. It smelled bad. I cannot stay five minutes in that washroom. I had affected the hedache for that smell.

Another significant peoblem is that your restroom shower failed to working properly. I need to take a shower before the match, because my body was dirty. However I cannot take a shower that day, then I played with dirty body. Moreover my colleague feel same problems.

This two issue have caused me significant inconveniance, and kindly I requast that you repair the bathroom shower Additionally appoint a maintanance staff for clean the bathroom daily, moreover place a air freshner that give good smell for bathroom.

Thankyou for your attention for these matters.

Sincerely,

Thanes.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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shower: 4

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing a clear description of the problems, expressing dissatisfaction, and suggesting solutions. However, the response could be more concise and impactful.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing disrupt the flow and clarity. Improved sentence structure and word choice would significantly enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient to convey the message, but the range is limited, and some word choices are inaccurate or inappropriate for a formal letter. Expanding vocabulary and using more precise language would improve the overall lexical resource.

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The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact clarity and overall understanding. A substantial improvement in grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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