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Band 4+: You are organizing a surprise birthday party for a close friend and need to coordinate with their family. Write a letter to the family members to arrange the party. You should include details about: - the date, time, and location of the party - what kind of food and drinks to bring - how to keep the party a secret from your friend

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good afternoon every body.

I am organizing a big party for Ricardo on Saturday.

The party begin at 6:00pm,but who want to came late can be no problem.The party will be in the Epic sana Luanda hotel, this place is in the center of the city near from Luanda’s bay.

In the party, will be the favorite Ricardo’s foods and drinks, like lasagna, meet ,fish and chicken grill and others foods, and drinks will have soda, beer and cocktail.

And one more thing, Dicardi doesn’t know rhat this party will happen so please nobody can speak nothing abaut this party to Ricardo.The person that will take him to party will be his girlfriend, and he will stay here at 7:30pm

Please e need that everyone go and go earlier,I happen all of you in the party.

Albert Araujo.

Word Count: 138

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

party: 7

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Task Response

The letter addresses the main points of the task, including the date, time, location, food/drinks, and secrecy. However, the language contains grammatical errors and lacks some clarity. To improve, focus on using more precise language, proofreading for grammatical accuracy, and ensuring a consistently formal tone. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the numerous errors make it difficult to follow effortlessly. Paragraphing could be improved to separate ideas more distinctly. Consider using more formal transition words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and somewhat repetitive. There's room to use a wider range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely and naturally. For example, instead of 'big party,' you could use 'surprise celebration.' Also, pay attention to correct word forms (e.g., 'meet' should be 'meat').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('party begin'), subject-verb agreement issues ('who want to came'), and incorrect preposition usage ('near from'). Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on using a variety of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy to improve clarity.

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