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Band 6+: You are planning a holiday with your friends, but you have different preferences regarding the destination. Write a letter to your friend explaining your choice of destination for the holiday. You should include details about: - why you prefer that destination - how it aligns with the activities you want to do - the benefits of the destination for the whole group.

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Dear Abhishek,

I hope this message finds you in great spirits. I am writing this letter with concern of suggesting a different destination for your trip. Although prior decided location is a great choice but I think bir billing is a place where we can spend quality time along with some adventurer sports.

It is a place which is one of the most popular paragling sports in India. The view of the mountains and valleys are absolutely breathtaking and I think flying over that landscape would be an unforgettable experience.

I want to try paragliding is because I have always been fasinated by flying. I think it would help me overcome my fear of heights and push me out of my comfort zone. So this would be a refreshing change and a great way to reconnect with nature.

The whole group would love to go paragliding. Its always more exiting and memorable to share such experience with someone.

Hope you will accept my proposal and thanks for your consideration.

Warm regards.

Karan.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 4

great: 3

think: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by proposing an alternative destination and justifying the choice. However, further elaboration on the benefits for the whole group would strengthen the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is generally clear, but the flow could be improved with smoother transitions between ideas. Some sentences lack a strong connection to the preceding ones.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter is understandable, several grammatical errors and inaccuracies affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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