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Band 6+: you are planning a summer vacation and have contacted a travel agency for information. Write an email to the agency in about 150-200 words. In your email: Explain where you want to go and why you are interested in that destination. Ask about payment methods and inquire if they can offer a better price than what you found online. Use appropriate tone and language for a formal email.

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Dear Mr. Harry,

The purpose of my writing today is to inquire about my upcoming adventure; this summer.

To begin with, I have chosen Greece, which offers a terrific variety of educational historical events regarding the ancient Greek period. On top of that, it is connected to many small islands and is known for its amazing beaches and landscapes.

Since I am rooting for history, a top-notch guide will be required to show us around. I like gatherings rather than living alone, therefore, an Airbnb with locals or other tourists can bind memories for a lifetime.

Finally, I would like to know about the mode of payment you accept. Do you require my credit card for a background check? Or any I.D. beforehand. However, many websites are offering 7 days and nights under 5000 dollars, would you be able to beat this price?

Your cooperation in this matter is greatly appreciated. Furthermore, an open line of communication, from your side, in this case, would greatly help out.

Sincerely,

Manpreet Badhan.

Word Count: 170

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 3

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Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The destination and reasons for choosing it are clearly stated. The inquiry about payment and price is also present. Minor improvements in clarity could enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The letter's message is mostly clear, but some sentences could be restructured for better flow. Paragraphing is acceptable, but could be improved for better organization and readability. The grammar errors slightly affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

7

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some word choices could be more precise and natural. The language is generally appropriate for a formal email.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6

While the letter uses a range of grammatical structures, there are some errors that affect the overall accuracy and fluency. Improvements in grammar would significantly enhance the overall quality.

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