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Band 4+: You are planning a weekend getaway for your family and want to invite your sibling and their family to join you. Write a letter to your sibling inviting them to the getaway. You should include details about: - the destination and why you chose it - the planned activities and accommodation - what they need to bring and the costs involved.

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Hello Sam,

I wanted to let you know that i have planned a weekend gateway this week since this is the long weekend i am hoping everyone will be free. The destination i chose is ‘ toronto islands’;the one of the reason is its just 40 km drive from our house consequently we won’t be get tired during journey and another reason;it is cost-efficient because of season-off season. Moreover, i have booked a private cruise to stay for two days so we can enjoy theride and do fun at the same time plus i have a decided to do pool party.However, everyone must bring their basic essential such as clothes, water and food. Nevertheless,, i think it would be $ 200 per person. I am excited to meet you and everyone on weekend.

yours truly ,

raman

Word Count: 137

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
everyone: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task requirements by including details about the destination, planned activities, accommodation, what to bring, and costs. However, the letter could benefit from more elaboration on each point to fully satisfy the prompt. For example, providing more specific details about the planned activities beyond just a 'pool party' and 'fun' would enhance the response. Also, the tone is a bit informal for a letter, and the organization could be improved with clearer paragraphing and transitions. To improve, focus on providing more detailed information and using more formal language. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is weak, making it difficult to follow the progression of ideas. Paragraphing is absent, and the flow between sentences is often disjointed. To improve coherence, use clear topic sentences to introduce each idea and transition words to connect related thoughts. Consider organizing the letter into distinct paragraphs, each addressing a specific aspect of the getaway, such as the destination, activities, and costs.

Lexical Resource

4
The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of unnatural phrasing. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to travel, accommodation, and activities. Focus on using more descriptive and specific words to convey your message effectively. For example, instead of 'do fun,' consider using 'enjoy various recreational activities.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical accuracy, review basic grammar rules and practice constructing a variety of sentence types. Pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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