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Band 4+: You are planning a weekend hiking trip with a group of friends but need to finalize the details. Write a letter to your friends outlining the plan. You should include details about: - the proposed dates and location for the hike - the level of difficulty and any necessary equipment - how you will handle transportation and meals.

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Dear friends

I’m writting to inform you about the details that need to finalized and be sure that everyone is prepared. Firstly, I want to be sure that you don’t have plans for this weekends, because I suggest we meet on Saturday near to our labruary and go from there to hiking trip. Unfortunatly, I don’t have a car so we will use a bus. In addition if everyone is agree with time we can meeting rarely at 8 a.m.

Secondly, I would say that you should bring a few itemes like water, flashlight,some food, warm clothes and crucial thing it’s tent but we need to bring only two tents because I have enormous tent. Therefor, if we will have five people we can fit in.

I would appreciate, if you pay attention to the rules because you should be aware. The first rule is that you need to be sure with fact that you have a much water because it’s importent for don’t be thirsty. The second rule is that you need to wear the warm things because in high places can be too cold. The third and last rule is that you need to should bring professional sneakers for comfortable and healthy foot.

I look forward to your response

Best wishes

Kani

Word Count: 214

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 5

don't: 3

should: 3

bring: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by outlining the arrangements for the hike, including the date, time, meeting location, essential items, and safety precautions. However, there are some omissions and lapses, such as a lack of specific details regarding the hiking location and a slightly disorganized presentation of information. To improve, focus on providing more specific details and ensuring a clearer, more logical flow of information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between ideas and ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single main point. For example, you could dedicate separate paragraphs to the date/time/location, the list of items, and the safety precautions. Also, avoid abrupt shifts in topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('labruary,' 'itemes,' 'importent'). Expanding your range of vocabulary and ensuring correct spelling and word choice would enhance the letter. For instance, instead of 'enormous tent,' you could say 'large tent.' Also, 'rarely at 8 a.m.' is not the intended meaning; consider 'promptly at 8 a.m.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and impact clarity. Errors include incorrect verb tenses ('I'm writting'), subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect article usage, and awkward phrasing ('you need to should bring'). Focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure to improve the clarity and accuracy of your writing. For example, 'I suggest we meet on Saturday near our labruary' should be 'I suggest we meet on Saturday near our library.'

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