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Band 6+: You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter  ask about the school  say what kind of accommodation you want  mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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Dear sir or madam,

I am writing this letter to get more information about your school

Recently, I heard so many things about your school, but I want to get it mission in your educational system to improve my language, which is very beneficial for me in future.

Let me explain my situation in detail. I wanted a school near my hostel because I do not want to waste my time in travelling and one major thing is that my school and hostel are very far away from nice places because it is a big trouble for me to understand the things deeplybecause if I do not get proper sleep, it is difficult for me to understand.

I would like to request that you provide me information about food because I don’t eat eggs and mushrooms in my diet because I am allergiic to this, which causes serious problems in my life.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Ishita Rani

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Task Response

6.5

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and organization. More specific questions about courses and accommodation are needed.

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5.5

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6.5

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. More sophisticated language would improve the overall impression.

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5.5

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