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Band 7+: You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter  ask about the school  say what kind of accommodation you want  mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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Dear Ms. Dimi,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to ask for some information about your English course, as I am planning to study English in the UK this summer.

I will be in London this summer, and I would like to study for three months. I am hoping to improve my writing, speaking, and reading skills.

Could you please send me the price of the academic English course? I would also like to know when the course starts and how many hours of classes there are each week. In addition, I would appreciate information about accommodation for students and how much it costs.

I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time.

Yours sincerely,

Nasser Dahish

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

english: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements by asking about the school's English course, inquiring about accommodation, and mentioning study preferences. However, it lacks specific details regarding the type of accommodation desired and any special requests like dietary needs. To improve, include specific details about the accommodation you prefer (e.g., homestay, shared apartment) and mention any dietary requirements. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is effective, and the transitions between ideas are smooth, contributing to a very coherent message.

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The letter demonstrates a strong command of vocabulary, using appropriate and varied language to convey the message effectively. The lexical choices are natural and contribute to the overall clarity and professionalism of the letter. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter exhibits excellent grammatical control, with accurate and appropriate use of a wide range of structures. The absence of grammatical errors enhances the letter's clarity and readability.

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Band 7+: You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter  ask about the school  say what kind of accommodation you want  mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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