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Band 5+: You are planning to go skiing next winter and you would like to get a group of friends together to come with you. Write a letter to a friend and invite them to come skiing. In the letter, • Invite your friend to come • Provide details of the holiday • Tell your friend what they will need bring with them on the holiday

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Dear Val,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to invite you for skiing next winter with a bunch of friends from college.

As you know me, I am a huge fan of going ski boarding in winters, and what can be more exciting than planning it with group of friends? I stumbled upon a brochure few days back , an exciting trip to blue mountains next winter in December during Christmas break. I am going to book minivan and it’s going to be a 2 hour drive from the nearby station from my house. The holiday is for 3days and 2nights of us staying in a cozy lodge.

Furthermore, you do not need to worry about bringing skis, helmet, goggles and ski poles as it will be available at the local rental shops. However, all you need to carry is your own warm jacket, a pair of gloves and socks.

I hope to hear a positive response and you can join us on this trip.

Yours truly,

Keya.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

going: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in detail and clarity would elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally easy to follow, but some improvements in paragraphing and flow would enhance readability. The grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but a wider range and more precise word choices would improve the overall lexical resource score. Some minor lexical errors are present.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter demonstrates some grammatical range, there are several errors that affect the overall clarity and accuracy. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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