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Band 4+: You are planning to organize a party for your parents' wedding anniversary in a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: request information about the availability of a banquet hall ask about the services they provide (food, decorations, music, etc.) request the price list .

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request information about your hotel available opportunity. I organized large and memorable wedding anniversary for my parents to 18 years old. They don’t know about special day. I want to make an unforgettable surprise. I see your hotel on the social media.Does your restaurant have large and luxury banquet hall? Because I suggested many guests and my parents’ friends to this day. I want comfortable seats in the banquet hall for 250 members.

Does your restaurants have delicious food, memorable decoration, and fun music. Because this day very important for me, I suggested popular artists and decors to this party. They are very talented. I want your cooker foods with attention. All things, all decorated, all foods should attraction people in the banquet hall.

I ask from hotel manager, you send price list my email. I see price and I sent your cards the money. I believe your hotel is reliable . I expect your answer. I hope you send soon.

Yours faithfully ,

Marjona

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

hotel: 4

banquet: 3

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Task Response

6

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task, clearly stating the purpose of the inquiry and requesting specific information regarding the banquet hall, services, and pricing. The details provided about the event are relevant and help to convey the requirements effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter is generally easy to follow, with a logical progression of ideas. Paragraphing is used appropriately to separate different aspects of the request. However, some sentences could be structured more smoothly to enhance overall flow.

Lexical Resource

4

A good range of vocabulary is used to convey the message. There is an attempt to use descriptive language, although some word choices could be more precise or natural. Overall, the vocabulary is adequate for the task.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3

The letter attempts to use a variety of sentence structures. However, there are noticeable grammatical errors and issues with punctuation that occasionally impede clarity and affect the overall accuracy. Focusing on sentence construction and grammatical accuracy would be beneficial.

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