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Band 4+: You are renting an apartment, and there has been an ongoing issue with noise from your neighbors. This is significantly disrupting your sleep and work. Write a letter to your landlord explaining the situation. You should include details about: - the nature and frequency of the noise problem - how it is affecting your daily life - what steps you would like the landlord to take to resolve the issue.

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Dear Amal,

I am writting to express my dissatisfaction regarding people who live in next door. I think you know we are living here for more than two years .Past neighbours , they stayed very frendly with us.But people who came last month are very uncooperative .They make loud noises up to mid night.Most of the time play musical instruments up to midnight.There are so many visiters in every time.

Futhermore, neumorous parties arrange them.This makes so many disturbances to us.Becourse next 25 th December our final year exams will be started . So , we have to do many verites of assignments and study works .So our neighbours make very disturbences to us every time.Moreover ,we already informed several time regarding this to them.But they did not take any action to this problem.

Finally we desided to inform you regarding this issue.Please give your immediate attention to this problem.If they do not agree your opinians please can you change your another apartment to us .We hope you will solve this problem immediately.Because we have not enough time to compleate our studies.

Thank you

Yours sincerly

Lkmi.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

regarding: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by describing the noise issue, explaining its impact, the steps taken, and requesting action from the landlord. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall, the message is clear. To improve, focus on using more precise language and proofreading for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more explicit transition words and phrases to connect your ideas and paragraphs more smoothly. For example, you could use phrases like 'In addition to this' or 'Therefore' to guide the reader through your letter. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('frendly,' 'neumorous,' 'verites'). To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is more precise and appropriate for the context. For example, instead of 'make loud noises,' you could say 'create excessive noise.' Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('we are living,' 'Past neighbours, they stayed'), subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Review verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct punctuation usage. Also, proofread carefully to catch and correct errors.

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