Band 6+: You are taking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven t finished it. Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you haven't handed in the project yet request more time to do it.

The letter appropriately addresses the task by apologizing for the late submission, explaining the reason (illness), and requesting an extension. The purpose is clear and all key points are covered. However, there are minor lapses in formality and clarity: the salutation and closing are informal ('Dear professor Ali', 'Your suncerely'), and some phrasing is awkward or unclear (e.g., 'a short axtention of 3/4 days' and 'only final part is left'). To improve, use a more formal tone, correct spelling and grammar, and ensure the request is clearly and politely stated. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

The letter is logically organized with a clear introduction, explanation, and request. However, the flow is slightly disrupted by abrupt transitions and a lack of cohesive devices. For example, the sentence 'I have now recovered and have almost finished my work' could be better linked to the following request. Consider using linking phrases like 'Therefore' or 'As a result' to improve the connection between ideas. Additionally, the final paragraph could be more smoothly integrated with the rest of the letter.

The vocabulary is generally appropriate for the context, but there are some inaccuracies and informal choices. For instance, 'axtention' should be 'extension', and 'suncerely' should be 'sincerely'. The phrase 'I promise I will submit my best work' is slightly informal; consider using 'I assure you that I will submit my best work' for a more formal tone. Also, 'I have completed 80% of tha project' could be rephrased as 'I have completed 80% of the project' for accuracy. Overall, the range of vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'And tha deadline' should be 'and the deadline', 'I hed a high fever amd tha doctor' should be 'I had a high fever and the doctor', and 'Because of these' should be 'Because of this'. Additionally, the sentence 'I have completed 80% of tha project and only final part is left' lacks an article before 'final part' (should be 'the final part'). The letter also has inconsistent capitalization and punctuation, such as 'Dear professor Ali' (should be 'Dear Professor Ali') and the closing 'Your suncerely' (should be 'Yours sincerely'). To improve, focus on proofreading for common errors and using a wider range of sentence structures.