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Band 5+: You are taking a holiday at a place. Recommend recommended by your local travel agent, and you have had a wonderful time. You have promised to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion. Write a letter to your travel agent as promised and let him know what you have been doing, and what you are going to be do before the end of the journey.

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Dear sir, You would remember that I had promised to write to you about what I think of the tourist destination you had recommended. The weather is pleasant. I swim every day, and I am getting tanned. My needs are met here. I must stay that the local people are friendly and the food is excellent. Kerala cuisine is simply beyond compare people are reasonably good at English. Kerala is known for its ‘unity in diversity’ as it is the mixture of different cultures.

I am joining a dance School ‘ Vijnana Kalavedi’, run by a French lady who has been here for the last 30 years, the festivals and art forms of Kerala like ‘Kathakali’ are unique, and I enjoy them greatly.

Let me reiterate that your choice of my holiday destination was excellent. I will meet you with umpteen photographs to share my experience, experiences of natural beauty and culture of Kerala.

Yours sincerely, Kapil

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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kerala: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by sharing the experience at the recommended tourist destination and mentioning future plans. However, it could have included more details about the activities done and plans for the remaining journey.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as abrupt transitions between paragraphs. Consider using linking words to improve the flow.

Lexical Resource

5.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some phrases could be more varied and sophisticated. Try to incorporate more descriptive language to enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasings present. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence clarity for improved accuracy.

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