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Band 7+: You bought an educational pack. You are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter. In your letter • say what you bought • specify the problems of the pack • suggest a solution.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Yeganeh Karimi, and attended to the “fundamentals of data science in medicine” course. I am writing to express my feedback about the package. I purchased the 30-hour online package that was recommended to medical doctors and researchers.

Although the description of the course stated that this course will be useful for researchers in the field of medicine, I did not found its relevance to medicine. In fact, the package explained the basics of data science, regardless of the subject. As a medical researcher, I expected to learn statistical methods that are useful in clinical research, instead of learning all methods.

To address the aforementioned problem, I highly recommend limiting methods to only relevant analysis. This will make the package more practical for your specific audience. I would be glad to help improve this package, if you require more details about my comment. Thank you for your time and attention.

Sincerely,

Yeganeh Karimi

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course: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, clearly stating the purchase, specifying the problems, and suggesting a solution. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To further enhance the response, consider adding specific examples of statistical methods expected in clinical research to strengthen the argument and suggestion.

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The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning, and each paragraph logically progresses the message. The use of cohesive devices is adequate, contributing to the overall clarity. To further enhance coherence, consider adding more specific transitions between ideas to guide the reader more smoothly through your reasoning.

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The vocabulary used is appropriate and generally accurate for the task. There is a good range of words and phrases related to the topic of educational packages and feedback. To improve, try incorporating more sophisticated or nuanced vocabulary to express your points with greater precision. For example, instead of 'useful,' consider words like 'applicable,' 'pertinent,' or 'relevant' depending on the context.

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The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar with only minor errors. Sentence structures are varied and generally accurate. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage to eliminate these small errors. Overall, the grammar is strong and supports effective communication.

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