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Band 4+: You did not visit your family past month because you have been busy in studies. now you are writing letter to your grandmother, to apologize then explain why you didn't come and lastly arrange a visit to meet them. start with Dear Mother,

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Dear Grandmother,

Hope you are doing well and taking your medicines on time. It’s your most hardworking grand daughter Samantha.

Firstly, apologies for not contacting you and visiting you. I have been really busy from past month because of my exams and some research assignments also I am doing a part time job to bare my expenses. Sometimes i think pursuing this degree was not a right decision plus now i am doing job also so their is a huge burden on me. Nevertheless i am here writing you a letter for giving you my update what i have been upto from last month and when i am planning to arrange a visit.

I am planning to book a ticket for next friday i-e 13th January and spend some quality time with whole family especially you.

Moreover, grandma you have been a great support in my life and also the one who will always be rooting for me in every decision of my life. Now please accept my apologies I’ll try not to disappear like this ever again.

Your favorite grand daughter,

Samantha

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by apologizing for not visiting the grandmother, explaining the reasons for the absence, and arranging a visit. However, the task could have been more directly acknowledged by starting with 'Dear Mother' as instructed.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with a clear structure. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition in the second paragraph. Consider using more linking words to improve the flow of ideas.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings are present. Work on using more precise and natural language to enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors in verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. Pay attention to these details to improve grammatical accuracy.

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