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Band 4+: You have been on a holiday and would like to tell a close friend about it. Write a letter describing your trip, including what you did, where you stayed, and what you enjoyed most.

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For my close friend.

I am writing this letter to tell you about my experience on a holiday.

Several days ago, I got opportunity to go to holiday due to I won in competition of science in whole of city. The place that I visited in Makassar, especially Malino.

Next, I went to there using a plane, after that I already arrived in Makassar. Continue, I used a car to go Malino, while enjoying the view beside on the road.

Next, I have arrived in Malino. First time I went there, I was really glad for this because so many spot you could visit, one of the spot I recommended for you is Water Fall. Honestly, I would like to living here but I miss my hometown actually. Before I came back to my hometown, I took a pictures and the landscape thou.

Hopefully, we can go on holiday together.

Sincerely.

Ismail.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately describes the trip, but could be more detailed and engaging.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter lacks a clear and logical flow. The use of transitions and sentence structure could be improved.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more varied and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing.

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