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Band 5+: You have been working for a company for more than a few years,and now have decided to leave the company. Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company.

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Dear Mr Johns

I am writing to you about my opinion which depends on company and my work. Last week the company Lining has offered me job with a high salary. I would like to tell you my thought on this.

As you know I am only one who works in family moreover my mother disabled person and nowadays she needs have an operation for this I have to earn more money. If we delay the operation she will not be able to walk any more.

Li-ning is suggesting me 200.000 dollars a year and your firm has been giving me 100.000 dollars a year. I have to say that my wages does not cover my expenses . I must admit that I have a lot of experiences good colleagues and successful career at Nike however for the reason which I mentioned above l am leaving office. If do not rise my earning l will be forced to continue working at Lining.

I hope you will accept my requirements l look forward to hearing from you.

Your sincerely

Madina Karmen

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Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully conveys the main message of resignation. However, the explanation could be more concise and directly address the reason for leaving.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's structure and flow could be improved. Some sentences lack clear connection to the preceding ones, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks sophistication and range. More precise and varied word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies significantly affect the clarity and overall impression. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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