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Band 5+: You have decided to join a local community club to promote environmental awareness. Write a letter to the club organizer requesting membership. You should include details about: - why you want to join the club - your background or experience related to environmental issues - how you plan to contribute to the club's activities.

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dear sir/madam

hello let me introduce myself, my name is Muhamad fikri Firmansyah. previously i read your advertaisment on instagram about outdoor activity for kids and i now writing about that.

last week i saw on your instagram and personally very interesting for join, because i have free time on date 12 desember 2025 which is this date ready. why i interesting for join due the event will brings many kids for to climb at burangrang mountain and there will teach how cooking in forest

currently, I work as a teacher at bpi primary school and i have experience 4 years for become teacher. moreover, i have experience to climb because me nature lovers.

i have plan when me could join your community, maybe i will prepare games for the kids, i think games very crutial because kids quickly boring thats why, when i join i will make some games. i waiting reply this latter and i hope could join this community at least i could contribute the event. oh yaa, i can keep my number 0987654321 and you can call me anytime. thank you.

best regard

muhamad fikri firmansyah

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Overall Band Score

5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 3

could: 3

games: 3

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Task Response

6

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in expressing the candidate's intentions and contributions.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter's structure and flow are inconsistent, affecting the overall coherence. Grammatical errors further hinder the clarity of the message.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks range. More precise and sophisticated language would improve the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors significantly affect the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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