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Band 5+: You have planned to study a distance course at an international university. Write a letter to the university officer requesting information about the course, introduce yourself, give details of the request, and express your gratitude. You should write at least 150 words. In your letter, you MUST use the name provided. Salutation: Dear Mr.Williams, Closing: Mr/Ms.Orujov(a

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Dear Mr Williams

My name is Ayla Orujova and l am eager about taking distance courses at an International University.

For a months l was looking for financial accounting courses which held by professor from international universities and my friend recommended me your courses as she was pleased with your teaching system. I am writing to request information regarding courses lessons subjects and requires from students . Also l would like to get information about packets for months or year if you have and price for them.

As l am majoring at finance l want to join several courses like economics financial accounting report and become professional at my field.

I genuinely appreciate your time and assistance in providing this information. Thank you once again for your consideration. I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours sincerely,

Ayla orujeva

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C1 - Intricate
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courses: 5

information: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses the task by introducing yourself, detailing the information requested about the distance course, and expressing gratitude. The content is relevant and sufficient. To improve, ensure all points are fully developed with specific examples where appropriate. Also, pay close attention to the accuracy of grammar and spelling. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider dedicating a paragraph to each main point: introduction, course details request, and expression of gratitude. This will enhance the flow and clarity of your letter.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. For example, instead of 'eager about taking,' you could use 'interested in enrolling in.' Try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to university courses and financial studies.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('a,' 'an,' 'the'). For example, 'For a months l was looking' should be 'For months, I have been looking.' Proofread carefully to catch these errors.

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