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Band 4+: You have received an email from an organizer who is planning a group trip in the coming years. The organizer asks for your opinion about: the best city to visit, the most suitable time for the trip, and whether the trip should be open to everyone or only to group members. Write a letter to the organizer and: suggest a city to visit, explain why this city would be a good choice, recommend the best time to travel, and give your opinion about who should take part in the trip. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear the School Trip Organizer,

I am writing in response to your letter suggesting my own opinions and feedbacks regarding the School Trip which is organizing next month.

First of all, I express my content about this planing journey and I believe that it can be opportunity to both foriegn and local students to explore our hometown widely. In my opinion, camping at the Hilol mountain is great idea because it makes unforgetable experience for students as well as teachers. Its natural beauty and adventure broaden their interest and love to the environment.

Furthemore, on the Hilol mountain, it tents to be easy to organize a several types of sport activities, such as mountain biking, ice-skating, skiing . They are not only sport activities which are useful their health, but also the opportunity to recharge their bataries and regain stamina to their studies.

The trip will be succesfull if the School administrations provides firts-aid equipments as well as a nurlar in case the accident may be happen.

I hope my suggestions will be useful and beneficial for you to plan an enjoyable trip.

Yours sincerely,

Lily Will.

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C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 4

school: 3

mountain: 3

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Task Response

The letter attempts to address the task but includes some irrelevant and inaccurate information. The response is not always clear and contains some language errors. The letter does not fully address all aspects of the prompt, particularly regarding who should participate in the trip. To improve, focus on directly answering each question posed in the prompt with clear and relevant information. Ensure that your suggestions are practical and well-explained. Also, proofread carefully for grammatical errors and clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's coherence is affected by unclear connections between ideas. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related points. To improve coherence, use clearer transitions between sentences and paragraphs, and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. For example, explicitly link the suggested activities to the benefits for students.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and occasionally inaccurate ('content' instead of 'enthusiasm'). To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is more precise and appropriate for the context. For example, instead of 'makes unforgetable experience,' consider 'creates a memorable experience.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and impact clarity. There are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on proofreading for common errors and practicing sentence construction. For example, 'it tents to be easy' should be 'it tends to be easy,' and 'firts-aid equipments' should be 'first-aid equipment.'

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